Here are some of the latest comments on my book by an editor:
Such an interesting idea here, and really great details!
But:
... but I have to admit the story itself didn't draw me in, ultimately, and didn't get "there" fast enough to keep my interest after the initial opening.
True that. The middle of the book does develop a little slowly. I wonder where the "initial opening" stopped for her.
No complaints here. My agent is awesome -- how many people even get seen by eight top publishing houses?
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